... That also reminded me I should resume the writing of the second chapter of the Long Story. I always have it open on my computer, yet never think about it or have time to resume it. The bad part is that I only have bits of story that I really want to use (and I know exactly what will happen in them), I have to fill the rest by inventing not to make it too short and to keep it coherent (especially the story's pace), as well as to develop the characters and overall setup. That's what's keeping me from releasing the second chapter x)
Edit: And wait, you're rewriting the old chapters? I'm interested now, but sadly I don't have much time to read them again x(
The problem is that it revolves about school life, and it might become a little repetitive or short pretty quickly the way it's going. Maybe I'll go for the "short" option from the third chapter on (since it might really get boring otherwise, and it wouldn't work for chapter 2 and feel rushed), but introducing better descriptions of the scenes and Ern's thoughts.
But another factor to the delay is that I don't have much time to write, and when I do, I don't think about it .__. I should try to though, since it's a long story and I've barely started to write it :/
If you go for school life, indeed, you might get to repeat a few things that are already used in the usual school life stories prevalent in anime. You should go with what you plan. And do keep up with your positive reinforcement. :D I'm looking forward to your work.
Thanks! It might take a little while though since I still have upcoming exams, BlazBlue Centralfiction to play, Virtue's Last Reward to finish, Steins;Gate to play and watch, forums to catch up on... But I'll try to make it happening real soon :D
Wrote two more paragraphs (217 words) today, and started writing a third one as well x) It's not much, but I'm getting there. Slowly, but surely, as they say. I just have a few more events to introduce (two big ones to be precise, and the end of classes, dinner and past curfew ones to be coherent with the first chapter), and the chapter should be good to go. I just hope the writing style will be coherent, with the pretty big time gaps separating the different edits XD
Just so you know, I'll be away, potentially until January 4th. So I won't be able to roleplay, won't reply to comments or whatever... I *might* pop in randomly, but don't get your hopes too high (I have a bad habit to catch up on forums).
Maybe, since I can't play on a home game system often (student, away from home, home consoles are at home, I have a PC otherwise), plus that way I could play console games on the go, potentially everywhere. Also because I like Nintendo's consoles.
What's up are the weekend, holidays... and the fact I'm back home (I'm a student) and that my parents are there, preventing me from catching up with the wiki. Also just bought two fighting games and playing the hell out of them, one in particular...
I should update the SSSSSS soon, now that I think about it. I mean, it's Christmas and all, that'd be a good gift.
the reason why i dont think the men are true slaves is because i dont think the monster girls would force men to do anything that would harm the men. the monster girls would only force them to do things that would make the men happier in the long run if they learn to accept it